ok let's seee.....*keeps to the deal XD crit with no ref. pic* The face seems ok, though I still wonder if that neck aint too wide....but probably not XD. Then the way you use the straight bones...I mean the ones which come from each shoulder to one point in the middle where the neckbones start and just above the chest. You seem to miss the 'ointy-ness' in each shoulder that is CAUSED by these bones which you've drawn XD.
I've noticed males have a bit more pointy shoulders than females now and then.

Next thing is the arms, a bit of muscle is ok but these are kind of big....like REALLY muscled XD. Also I can't really see his left lower arm that well but it seems to start straight...? you have this lower arm muscle that makes the inner side of your lower arm less straight than the outer side.

As for his chest....mhh.....his 'bewbs' XD are too showy for what he's missing when you look at where his abs should be.....or are the abs there? @_@ I see two very very light drawn lines that could be the abs.....XD then again they still don't match up to that chest...........but at least the arms do .

:3 and last but not least, you either located the belly button too high up or made the arms too long

:] few, great job though hun, you're improving so much every time you draw X3 I'm scared to think of what will happen if you drew as much as I do XD' oh my..

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I should be ashamed of myself?
What on earth are you talking about : D?

I THINK the neck is fine, not sure. XD

Lessee.
Myah I know about the shoulders, the bones sorta went there after I drew the actual shoulders. XD

And the arms aren't really THAT muscley are they? =o
I mean, that's not so much more than I have, and I don't have a lot. =o
Maybe I just drew them too defined. =o

Other than that, I sorta didn't put any detail in the abs/lower arms which is why they're not too defined. XP

As for the belly button, it's too high up. XP

...XD I KNOW your arms and those aint like yours at all if you ask me.

X3 ok

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I should be ashamed of myself?
What on earth are you talking about : D?

His are normal, mine are tiny. XP
And really, I did some quick checks on how the arms are compared to the neck, it all works out. XD

XD okay then

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I should be ashamed of myself?
What on earth are you talking about : D?